Thursday 24 September 2015

compton

At Compton Elementary School in New York, there was a boy named Joe Parker. He wasn't just a boy, he was the new nerdy kid, yet sporty as well. So far Joe had no friends, but it was only the start of the day. There was this guy named Steve-o
the guy that could make almost anyone laugh whether they were down and sad. Steve-o could make you laugh when ever he saw you in the day he was funny, at night he was crazy MEHEHEHEHE, but there was another guy the guy that you wouldn't want to be his friend was the bully his name was Fred. He would steal your food and hit you.
One day Joe brought money and bort his lunch but the mistake was he sat at Fred's table fred was a short tempered guy fred grabbed joe's food  and said ‘’IT'S MINE NOW BOY,GO AWAY’’ so joe walked away in tears the next day joe made a device plant to to prank fred so the next day joe created a tripwire that triggers a pie trap so the pie flings at fred's face. So much time comes along joe tells everyone about the tripwire beside from fred so fred walked in and bad smack fred got humiliated everyone was laughing joe goes to fred and say don't pick on anyone ever again. fred runs away crying everyone gives joe a pat on the back and from that day forth fred stopped bullying

blake

THE END

1 comment:

  1. good punctuation,good model language.next shot is to check your spelling

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