purpose: persuade mr elder on why we should get our own tech center
audience: mr elder/ mr moore
lg: punctuation

Mr elder we need our own tech center for multiple reasons 1 because of the old grumpy tec teachers that are there. number 2 the cost wouldn't be a problem because of all they other stray schools that go to tech like st joseph's what's the bet they would like a tray tec center?.

our tech teachers would be marlin and a teacher from st josephs do you think that would be good?.

with this tech center in stratford we will be able to make better things and both schools would make a profit so i think it's a good idea but do you.