purpose: persuade mr elder on why we should get our own tech center
audience: mr elder/ mr moore
lg: punctuation

Mr elder we need our own tech center for multiple reasons 1 because of the old grumpy tec teachers that are there. number 2 the cost wouldn't be a problem because of all they other stray schools that go to tech like st joseph's what's the bet they would like a tray tec center?.

our tech teachers would be marlin and a teacher from st josephs do you think that would be good?.

with this tech center in stratford we will be able to make better things and both schools would make a profit so i think it's a good idea but do you.

6/5/16

S.o.s: 5 clare paragraphs

Have you  ever been to burger king,mcdonald's or any other fatty food places well well you may have ordered something unhealthy or unhygienic. Well here's something you may not have known a worker at wendy's dropped a half smoked marijuana cigarette in a cheeseburger and served it to a customer that would be disgusting so what else could be in your burger buns.

Well you may know mcdonalds,wendys,burger king,kfc and many many more some of the most popular fatty foods are burgers,french fries,pizza,fish and chips,fried chicken and you may even have a craving for some of these. Well in 2001 a lady bit into a sausage and egg breakfast sandwich from burger king as she bit into that burger she chewed and felt something hard in her mouth so she spat it out and sore a half lodged needle tip from a syringe. It had pricked her check lucky she didn't get infected. How did it even get there, how come no one noticed it before it got served to the customer these are some of the questions that have been asked but why was there even a syringe in the kitchen in the first place. They say that fatty food places are healthy hygienic and have regular kitchen inspections well doesn't look like it.

This is about unhealthy part about these places well at burger king do not order the triple whopper with cheese this burger clocks in at a fatty 1,020 and they are also packing in a whopping 65 grams of fat so are you going to order this next time you're there and did you know that mcdonalds the most unhealthy thing there is the chocolate triple thick shake and it has 1160 calories do you know how unhealthy that really is for you.

This will ither make you change your mind

16/5/16

Purpose: create a resource for a  y ⅚ student about how to be s the best version of themselves in y ⅞

Audencia: y ⅚

Lg: use examples from experience to help  explain each topic you right

S.o.s: -use language appropriate to your audience

-use effective and prices language to enhance

Intro

As you get to year 7 and 8 you have the role of a leader with the younger kids looking up to you so u must show how good you can be and how well they can be and should be all the time.

Peer pressure

Well peer pressure will be a big the of every one's life what can cause peer pressure having bad friends. peer pressure can get you into bad situations like cops,drugs,alcohol and other stuff. Do get peer pressured into stuff because after you do it, it doesn't feel the greatest so u shouldn't peer pressure anyone ethire.

Leadership

Some of the leaderships at stratford primary are big the others but doesn't mean you're better than others if you get one of the roles so treat others well and you will be able to keep that role and be a responsible leader in the school but with the role of being a leader your attitude for work and helping must be great so there are some great leaders in our  school this year so you can look up to them and you could be there one day

Getting recognized

Being a leader has its perks like getting recognized for your sports your smarts so you could go for house captain, school counselor and other stuff your teachers will recognize the good behaviour and treat you to working in the corridor going to grab stuff from the printer and other stuff. so if you're a leader it will help you get recognized.

21 june 2016

Purpose: write a report on the build a business experience.

Audience: mr moore,bank manager.

Lg: use structural features that are appropriate to the purpose.

S.o.s:include numbers to add more detail to your report.

Today i'll be talking about how i found the process leading up to market night, what a success market night was, if we made a profit if we can pay back our loan, what went well and what could we change or improve so let's get into it.

The process leading up to market night was hard all the pressure on getting our product ready which was a woulden bath boat,getting our loan which took us ages because of all the stuff we had to figure out like how much etc and we started kinda late so we had to work had luckily we got through it.

For our time at market night it was pretty good no the greatest but still good we sold 20 of them and made a profit of 40 dollars we are able to pay back my loan.

The things that went well was. How much we sold,how much we made that we attracted little kids. We could change a lot like how our stall looked, how much we sold the for, how our prototype looked, sold something else so i think we would have been successful with all, these changes