Thursday, 11 February 2016

summer days


melted ice cream dripping down my arm .
tar sticking to my jandle .
the miny waves drag sand and shells pat my feet .
the sun burns my back making my blacker and blacker.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous14 February 2016 at 13:40

    great similes also metaphors
    just work on more lines

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  2. Anonymous8 March 2016 at 13:50

    nice poem

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