Thursday 4 June 2015

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Blake Hereora
LG:to write an self descriptive piece writing
Blake Hereora has many strengths and talents. His strongest point is rugby skills. He has great strengths
because most people that come at  him get blown off.
He's only eleven years old. He has other strengths and

talents like mechanic and engineering.

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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 15:29

    Hi
    You have definitely achieved your goal. I think this describes you well . Your capital letters are good but one thing i think you could work on is compound sentences.
    Orion

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  2. Anonymous15 June 2015 at 15:55

    thank you orion

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  4. Mrs Rova's Blog16 June 2015 at 02:24

    Great piece of writing Blake. I agree with the rugby comments! Good use of capital letters too. You may need to add that you are very friendly and helpful. You are a great role model to all the children in Room 9.

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